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Carmel1507
Carmel1507
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Joined: Jan-18-07
Posts: 3
Topic Posted: Mar-15-07 10:00 PM
palms are sweaty, heart racing and beating so fast,
will i beable to hold on, am i even able to last,
the thought of u leaving can never be true,
if i hear thoes words in the same sentence than i'll turen green or mabe even blue,
i can't take it, help me please,
i give u anything, here take my keys
i'll give up my body, mind and even soul,
baby i don't care, take control,
what.......what you say,
no, no repeat that, on my birthday,
no, no, no, no, no, are u crazy,
that's why u acted tired and lazy,
how could u pick her over me,
stupid boy no, no give me back my key,
i never wanted u anyway,
yeah, yeah, what ever, buy-buy hit the highway


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EternalDarkness
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Joined: Mar-4-07
Posts: 24
Reply Posted: Mar-16-07 10:26 AM
I like your poem. Good job. It really captures the mixed feelings someone has when they are going to be dumped or break up with someone.


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DreamOfDarkness
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Joined: Oct-16-06
Posts: 12
Reply Posted: Apr-4-07 01:29 PM
I like, I can feel so much love for your bf. I know how you feel, iy hurts so much when you're about to break up with your man. You really did put everything down pack in this poem, because it's your view on the out come.



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